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Flint
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Swanpaw is an intelligent, six moons old RiverClan apprentice. Her fairly long, gray and brown striped fur doesn't look like a swan, but her mother said she thought it would grow to be more beautiful than a swan's. Her mother was a loner whose family was attacked shortly after Swanpaw's birth. She had been sent off with the newborn kit to find safety, but they got lost. Passing a swan on a lake, the kit had recieved the name Swan, which became Swankit when her mother, starved and exhausted, had staggered into RiverClan territory. Shortly after they'd been taken in due to the section of the Warrior Code that said to never abandone a kit in need and out of the kindness of the clan, Swan's mother died of illness. Luckily, Swankit didn't catch the sickness, so she grew into a  strong kit, and now apprentice. Swanpaw is fairly shy, but she's very grateful to the clan who took her in and raised her. She's gracious, doesn't take more than she needs, and always does her best to help. She is proud (inside her head, of course) of her ability to see the good in every cat. However, while Swanpaw is quick, agile, and tries hard, she really doesn't have any brute strength, and she dreads battle training. Her biggest issue, however, is that she can't stand the idea of killing anything larger than a mouse or a small fish, and even then she's reluctant to kill more than one.

 

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August 14, 2012 at 7:18 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Keisharall
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August 15, 2012 at 4:26 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Flint
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Thanks!

August 15, 2012 at 7:47 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Tiga
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August 24, 2012 at 6:23 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Keisharall
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Hey, Ashtail, thanks for coming to the site. Just a couple questions. Is there any more that you'd like to elaborate on? Any more history, or her personality? We'd like to aim for around 10 long, full sentances.


Also, was Ashtail supposed to be a medicine cat? Because if her Mother was, she might not really be allowed to, as it's forbidden for medicine cats to have kits, so she'd have trouble earning to be even a part of the Clan, let alone a high position.


If she was, then she'd know what all the herbs were, so you don't have to add what herbs she'd know, and she wouldn't really be all that respected and might not even be seen as a Medicine Cat by some people.


If she wasn't then, sorry, but Ashtail wouldn't be allowed to keep those herbs, and she really wouldn't be allowed to really know what they were, or use them. 


Just some things to look at. I just want to point out that I'm not trying to offend you or anything of the sort. These are just some things that need to be cleared up so we can get you up and running with Role-play. :)

August 24, 2012 at 7:59 PM Flag Quote & Reply

Tiga
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August 25, 2012 at 6:38 AM Flag Quote & Reply

Cloudy
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Thanks for changing that, Tiga, it's much better.  :)



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